Vignettes 5 and 6 are short, transitional scenes. Clay is an actual person, but I either don't remember his last name or never found it out to begin with. I can till visualize him in that cowboy hat. Vignette 7 introduces the only fictional character in the whole story, Wile E. Coyote. I watched a lot of cartoons, can you tell? Enjoy.
Vignette 5
Jake stood among a
dozen boxes in various states of being filled. His mother, brothers
and sisters rushed around him and he covered his ears for a moment to
block the noise.
“Jake, get the
rest of your toys packed,” said his mother. “The movers will be
here any minute!”
Jake sighed. “Why
do we have to move anyway?”
“Because this
house isn't big enough for all of us. You know that. Besides the new
house is much nicer than this!”
“I'll still be
sharing a room with Jerry. So it won't be any different!”
“Stop whining.”
“You never listen
to me when I tell you what he does!”
His mother rushed
off in another direction. Jake sighed and began to empty his toy
chest. When he had packed everything he could, he stepped outside and
saw Clay standing by himself. He went over to him. “I'm sorry, we
gotta move.”
Clay just nodded and
tipped his cowboy hat. Jake felt a little awkward standing there and
nodded back at Clay. He went back inside and tried to hide from the
chaos that ensued.
Vignette 6
They hadn't been in
the new house very long. Jake felt like his situation hadn't improved
much with the new house. Yeah, they had a bigger front yard. The
house stood on a corner so the yard seemed to go on forever. But
grass made Jake sneeze, like everything else, so he preferred to stay
indoors.
His ride to
kindergarten took longer, and waiting for the van was starting to be
a pain, because the weather was turning colder.
With the new house
came a maid, something he wasn't used to. Winnie was a big woman, and
when Jake came back from kindergarten, he would find her watching
soap operas. She would quickly turn to work once his mother got home
from work, but that was the only time he could remember seeing her in
action.
At kindergarten he
had started to relax a little, but as Thanksgiving approached he
learned that his class would be required to put on a holiday play.
That filled him with anxiety, even though all he had to do was hold
up a snowman cut-out and say a line. He practiced the line when he
was alone because if he tried it around his brothers he'd wind up
with a sore arm from the punches.
As the day
approached to present their play, he grew even more anxious. His
mother and her boyfriend would be there, along with his brothers and
sisters. Before the play started his teacher tried to give him some
confidence, but as soon as he took the stage and picked up his
snowman cover, he tried to hide behind it. He said his lines quickly
and without emotion and only then did he relax. But he felt better
once he ran off the stage.
Amanda tried to
encourage him afterward, but the rest of the siblings poked fun at
him. He went to his room after dinner, pulled the covers over his
head and tried to block it all out.
Vignette 7
Kindergarten finally
came to an end and Jake sighed a happy sigh since he would have a
whole summer to himself to recuperate. That was short-lived when his
mother announced one day that she was going to marry her boyfriend,
Frank. He wanted his mother to be happy, and she definitely was when
Frank was around, but Jake never thought of him as a father-figure.
He never played with Jake, not that Jake ever asked him to, but he
felt it would have been nice of the man to offer to toss a ball with
him, like he always imagined his father would do.
Instead, Frank
avoided him and never talked directly to him. Jake had gotten used to
that as long as Frank wasn't there very often, but now that they were
getting married, Jake realized that Frank would be there all the
time. It didn't sit well with him. Plus the man only took him for a
ride in his Corvette once, and never offered again.
As a way of
celebrating the news, Frank took them all to a local carnival. As
they drove in the family station wagon to the carnival, Jake watched
the street signs pass. He realized the carnival was pretty much a
straight shot down the road from where they lived.
The carnival was fun
enough, Jake supposed, but he didn't ride the rides very much. Most
of them made him sick to his stomach. But he watched while his
brothers and sisters had fun and shot a BB-gun at a target or two,
and watched the monkeys climb the pole when you shot water in their
mouths. The lights and noise soon got to him, though and he wandered
off to find someplace quiet.
After he recovered,
he looked for his mother and siblings and couldn't find them. He
started to panic and then realized he knew the way home and it wasn't
far. He began to walk back home, taking care to wait for the lights
to change to cross the street. Soon, he drifted off in his own little
world, to help the time pass.
“Going somewhere?”
Jake looked to his
side and gaped at what he saw. Wile E. Coyote walked alongside him.
“W-what are you
doing here?” Jake stopped walking, rubbed his eyes and looked
again. Wile. E. was gone. He took a deep breath and then started
walking again.
“You can't get rid
of me that quickly.”
Jake turned and saw
the coyote again. It appeared as a cartoon, walking with him. He
ignored it.
“You're not real.”
“Of course I'm not
real. I'm in your head. But that doesn't mean you should ignore me!
Now that's plain impolite.”
“You're a figment
of my imagination and I'll ignore you if I want!”
Jake passed a street
sign. He recognized it and kept going forward.
Wile E. walked with
him. “Your mother will be mad when you get home.”
Jake stopped for a
moment and then continued walking. “I know. But it's not my fault I
got lost.” He walked a few steps. “She's not a bad mother. If she
only stopped smoking.”
“Your whole family
is against you.”
Jake stopped short
and watched in anger as an anvil dropped on Wile E's head. “That's
for being mean.” He resumed walking as Wile E. waddled after him,
the anvil slipping off after a moment. “My family loves me. It's
just that they're all so busy, and I'm not. Besides, I like walking
by myself.”
“Then why am I
here?”
Jake stopped again.
“I don't know, Mr. Big Shot. Why are you here?”
“Because you need
someone to talk to and no one else will do it.”
“I don't need you
to be able to talk to myself.” He began walking again. “Go away!”
Wile E. began to run
after him and ran into a street pole. He vanished before Jake's eyes.
“And don't come back!”
Jake sighed and
began to move his arms to the rhythm of a song that he had heard.
About an hour passed, with what felt like a hundred songs passing
through his mind, when he found the turn he was looking for, and knew
he was almost home. He made the turn and felt his feet suddenly grow
tired and sore. He caught his breath and walked slower.
A few minutes later
he saw his house, and Amanda outside. He waved to her and heard her
shriek. She ran into the house and a moment later his mother came
running out. He ran into her arms.
“Where have you
been, Jake?” Her voice sounded frantic, something he had never
heard before.
“I got lost! And
since I knew the way back, I walked. My feet are tired, though.”
“You had us so
worried. I almost called the police. I thought someone snatched you!”
“I'm all right,
really.”
She dragged him into
the house amid cries and hugs from his sisters. She took him straight
to the bathroom, started the bath water for him and undressed him.
She looked at his feet, which had started to form blisters and she
rubbed them, fussing at him the whole time.
“Don't EVER do
that again, do you hear? You had us so worried!”
“I won't!” Just
the fussing over him alone was enough to keep him from doing it
again. She finally left him alone to soak in the tub, in cool water,
and he felt more relaxed than he had ever felt as he dunked his head
under the water. He relished the silence.
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